I hope that by writing this I will be able to improve my reading and writing of Chinese.
Also I plan to write this by myself, so for you Chinese readers. If you see any mistakes let me know.
So here goes.....
到这个月为止在中国一年. 现在我想我的口语和听力比读和写很好所以在这我写汉字。
八月我在韩国没有学习。三十一号我到了大连然后九月一号开学新的学生。 每天我运动和学习汉语。现在我复习去年学习。
Its short but its a start.....
Monday, September 15, 2008
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Hi,Hunter. This is Lena if you can still remember me. It is a good method to improve your Chinese. You have made a good start!Congratulations!
In the 1st paragraph, I can give you some suggestions as following:
1."到这个月为止在中国一年", you need a subject"我". And you need a adv. "已经" to show the perfective tense.
2. If you use “口语、听力”,then "读、写"can be "阅读、写作",'coz they are all more formal(a little bit)and they all have 2charators.Otherwise you can use"听、说、读、写" ,this is kinda set phrase.
3."比……好(得多)" (right)
“比……很好” (wrong)
4."所以在这我写汉字。" I don't understand.^_^
Well,Let's stop here today. If you need someone to practice Chinese,just let me know.I'll try to help you when I am not too busy.Take care!
你还要说:“每天都我学习汉语,做运动和去酒吧喝茶” 哈哈哈。。。是不是?
Good shot!
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